David Guinness

Horoscopes are good general advice for anybody, usually. Now, if you read Linda Goodman's Sun Signs, or something like that, there really seems to be some truth to the different ...

This is a good poem! Especially for a first attempt! I'm impressed. The second verse... "And he's waiting for you"... I'm not sure about this, I think there may be ...

J. Haux fences, and I would like to some day learn to fence. I've got a pile of pickets in my backyard that should function quite nicely. :wink: I agree ...

I think I should be eligible for the ten points as well, considering I know nothing about you, apparently. ;) And maybe that way I can recoup some of my ...

Well, Jacquie... Interesting topic. Apparently I'm a terribly inattentive friend, because I thought all of these were fairly accurate. Oh dear. I think you should be a little less shy ...

At this point, it's a very nice poem, instead of song lyrics... I would suggest you have a sort of flashback and explain exactly what you needed and they wanted ...

Love it! :) But, seriously, Snoink...have you any work that you've written SERIOUSLY?... ;)

Thanks, Elephant! there any way to indent?... Good. I'm glad. A friend of mine didn't get it, but he was half-asleep at the time, so... :lol:

The last formatted line of the first stanza...I would suggest you look it over and decide how you want it to be...depending on how it's phrased when read it either ...

I like this. The imagery is very good. "I wouldn’t know. For dawn has just begun; The light just beginning to shine. Who knows what the day will bring?" Personally, ...

Thank you all. I actually did have it in paragraph format, but apparently I don't know how to use the "PRE" function correctly, because it did exactly the opposite of ...

Well done. And it really shows that...you spend WAY too much time here. :D

Very morbid, and I actually think it's very good. I do think, though, that it could be improved upon, slightly. The first two stanzas I would rework to make rhyme ...

She runs as fast as she possibly can, turning corners, dodging obstacles, trying to insert as much distance as possible. She throws open a door, only to find a long, ...

This reminds me of The Beatles' "A Day in the Life"...